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~sevenofeleven
Aaron Weaver
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United States
Current Residence: Behind the Italian restaurant, next to dumpster.
Operating System: Windoze/Mac OS X
MP3 player of choice: Winamp
Skin of choice: My own skin
  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: Oitoon Shamble
  • Reading: Sucker Paunch 2: The fat of the land
  • Watching: Paranormal Witless
  • Playing: SmackenDrang
  • Eating: Little Celestia's Hay Snackers
  • Drinking: Sparkel Juice
This song is for you bus pisser!

I pissed on a bus, I pissed on a bus.
People saw me empty my bladder and did not make a fuss!

I pissed on a bus, I pissed on a bus.
Now I have done this thing, I feel more dangerous!

One woman saw the stream of pee, she got up and went to
the other side of the bus to get away from me!

I pissed on a bus, I pissed on a bus.
My stream was seen by a teen, he just shrugged and said it was 2013.

I pissed on a bus, I pissed on a bus.
Now that I saw a man about a horse, I just sat up front with
a halo over my head of course!

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:iconekknight:
~EKKnight 2 days ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
so I took your advice on formatting and here is what I came up with [link]
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:iconsevenofeleven:
I saw it and left a reply.

I am curious to how you are going to write this.

Are you going to do the slow build or the in the face horror?

Slow build is like the gothic/HPL stuff.
I have been doing a lot of that.

Want to try the in the face horror stuff.
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:iconekknight:
~EKKnight 1 day ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
What is the in your face horror style? I was thinking about seperating Mario and luigi and letting tension build with Luigi while Mario has action scenes.
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:iconsevenofeleven:
In your face is like action straight out almost all the time.

Maybe something like the walking dead.
You know there are zombies, there is no build up to finding out what is the threat.

Most of my stories have had this slow build up to what is the threat and then the fight with it.
In your face would be like the hero knows that the threat is
and now the rest of the story is how to deal with the threat.


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Sounds like you have a plan.
I would like to see how it goes.
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:iconflyingbrickanimation:
~FlyingBrickAnimation May 15, 2013   General Artist
My thoughts on Equestria Girls: [link]
(Please hear me out on this one, I actually try to give a thoughtful critique on it.)
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:iconsevenofeleven:
I left a comment.
It is a good critique.
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:icondarkalicornwarrior:
*DarkAlicornWarrior May 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
Sorry if the correction is taking to long, DA writing stash is being a bit of a pain to operate atm...but I will use your corrections in this chapter (Assuming it is alright with you) :)

and sorry the replies aren't even working for me right now...
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:iconsevenofeleven:
No problem.
I just use notepad and Open writer to check for spelling.
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:icondarkalicornwarrior:
*DarkAlicornWarrior May 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
Notepad and open writer? is that a program or an actual notepad??? Noob question is nooby
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:iconsevenofeleven:
Notepad is on the pc.
Open writer is a free program thats like Word.

Could use google docs too.
I use that when I am sharing stuff with other people.
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